Edges shouldn't be rounded they should be sharp at the corners. Look at my vespa project for pictures.
even no the corner aint sharp will it still work alright. and also i was told that not to polish were i flowed the casses as the petrol dont mix as well.. remember this is the first time iv given this ago.
you can do more on the intake. have a look at that one: http://www.proflow-tuning.de/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/IMG_1507.jpg Also, what cylinder are you flowing this case for? You shouldnt definitely make markings for your crank... Besides that it looks real good!